Reborn 15 eBook DW Jackson
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Transported to a new world that reminds Ash of a game. Ash takes to the new world as a chance to remake himself. He fights and works to make himself stronger. He finds people to call friends and family but not all is well in this new world. The people are divided and those at the bottom are treated poorly. Ash must keep the secret of his blood otherwise everything he has built will fall down around him.
Reborn 15 eBook DW Jackson
*Minor spoilers and quoting of Eric Cartman ahead*I should start by saying that despite my rating, overall, I really did like this story. The concept is a bit of a twist on the LitRPG genre, as the title is a reference to how the protagonist is reborn into a plane of existence that features the mechanics of a MMORPG. Why is the world this way? The deity who created the world thought it would be fun. This was a promising start, that did lead into varied interactions between the members of the cast, as the protagonist acclimated to the new environment and culture that he found himself in.
So after all of this, why the heck am I only giving this two stars? If you are reading this review, odds are you have also read Reinaldo Cervini's
review of this work, which highlights the problem areas. If you have not, you should know that the grammar is riddled with errors, not quite on every page, but often enough so that a misplaced word or missing comma will make it challenging to stay immersed in the text. This is compounded by the issue of pricing. At the end of the first series of chapters, the author states that about 80 hours is spent per set of chapters, hence the price you see listed. The issue with this is that should not have to be said in the work, it should be good enough to stand without it. It instead acts to exacerbate the awkward sentence structure, and how the ending cuts off in a manner reminiscent of a certain someone saying "screw you guys, I'm going home!"
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Reborn 15 eBook DW Jackson Reviews
Normally I would not be so harsh reviewing a book, but this is one of the most expensive books I've bought on . After reading the authors whining, badly written excuse that he put so much time in writing it as an excuse for the high price, I was not amused to find the story facile, the characters one dimensional, the plot boring and predictable, I still would have given him three stars, except for the very obvious fact that he obviously spent little to no time proofreading it - the number of spelling and grammatical errors is appalling. If he did give it a once over, he did it half asleep or drunk.
The premise of the plot is a fairly common one, and there are numerous books with the same basic plot line, but written much better, with few to no spelling errors. They are so numerous it quickly becomes very annoying and distracting. Instead of this book, read the "Bathrobe Knight" series instead, same premise, but written much better, with characters who are more developed.
Don't spend the exorbitant price what amounts to a poorly written children's book, unless you prefer zero surprises, and one dimensional characters and stumbling over so many misspellings it becomes an obstacle to reading the story - you'll find yourself anticipating errors instead of falling into the story.
I would have given it 4 stars even with all the grammatical errors. But the author goes into a rant in the beginning justifying the price saying that he spends more than 120 hours per book (novelette).
If you're going to sell an average of 90 pages for 3 dollars or 454 pages for 10 dollars then it should be perfect or without any glaring errors that any proof reader could fix.
I almost never write reviews but trying to justify the price really irked me after having read the book.
Now going to the book itself.
The plot is well thought out, some what predictable but it does surprise, at times.
SPOILERS
The mc gets overpowered in a good way. What I mean by that is that he progressively gets stronger without destroying the plot and making it believable.
NO MORE SPOILERS
Conclusion If knowing that the book has glaring grammatical errors and the price doesn't bother you then buy the book, it is enjoyable.
P.S. The book isn't riddled with errors every page but every chapter or so and besides those errors it's well written. Also when I speak about grammatical errors I'm talking about having tense errors or missing words in a sentence.
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's book rating system is poor -- I didn't "dislike" the "book" but, in truth, the book deserves a much lower rating than "3"...
Value There isn't much "value" in paying $10 for what amounts to a single book of dubious quality, and especially not for the $15 it would have cost at the original "per novella" price.
Quality The author has "borrowed" from multiple sources, giving some substance to what's essentially a "gamer's diary".
The story is "okay", the editing and proof reading are terrible -- even worse, laughable. Major errors average one or more per paragraph, often throwing a reader entirely out of the story. The author apparently doesn't read/learn from his reviews -- I see little improvement between the "5 episodes". It has the feel of writing translated from another language, without someone familiar with the target language actually proofing the document.
Basically, a "once-through" rough draft, and an insult to readers. As an additional "insult", there's the author attempting to justify price by number of writing hours. I'll not be reading any more of the author's releases -- the price definitely isn't justified by quality...
*Minor spoilers and quoting of Eric Cartman ahead*
I should start by saying that despite my rating, overall, I really did like this story. The concept is a bit of a twist on the LitRPG genre, as the title is a reference to how the protagonist is reborn into a plane of existence that features the mechanics of a MMORPG. Why is the world this way? The deity who created the world thought it would be fun. This was a promising start, that did lead into varied interactions between the members of the cast, as the protagonist acclimated to the new environment and culture that he found himself in.
So after all of this, why the heck am I only giving this two stars? If you are reading this review, odds are you have also read Reinaldo Cervini's
review of this work, which highlights the problem areas. If you have not, you should know that the grammar is riddled with errors, not quite on every page, but often enough so that a misplaced word or missing comma will make it challenging to stay immersed in the text. This is compounded by the issue of pricing. At the end of the first series of chapters, the author states that about 80 hours is spent per set of chapters, hence the price you see listed. The issue with this is that should not have to be said in the work, it should be good enough to stand without it. It instead acts to exacerbate the awkward sentence structure, and how the ending cuts off in a manner reminiscent of a certain someone saying "screw you guys, I'm going home!"
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